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MSN

memanggil dengan susah payah namun tidak dijawab

menanti dengan penuh harapan namun tidak ada hasil

terus bertanya dan membuka percakapan, namun tetap terasa dingin

di depan mata nampak dirimu, tapi sebenarnya kau tidak berada disana

saat tidak mengharapkan dirimu, tiba2 engkau muncul dan membuat hatiku terguncang

kau bilang kau sibuk padahal kau hanya tidak rela diganggu

kau bilang kau ada waktu luang tetapi tidak sepenuh hati mengobrol denganku

(puisi dengan latar belakang kejengkelan terhadap msn dan temen2 didalamnya…XDD)

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4 Responses to “MSN”


  1. June 16, 2008 at 7:27 pm

    salah satuny g kah??
    dipanggil dari jam 5 sore,bales nya jam 12 malam
    hahahahaha

  2. 2 moccavanilla
    June 16, 2008 at 7:31 pm

    hahaha, merasa kesindir ya??
    tapi kan emang tadi lu offline, jd bkn salah lu
    ini sih benernya lebih buat d**a, tau kan…
    XD

  3. March 29, 2009 at 8:05 am

    have all buzzin, poking, tickling,
    but someone’s ain’t responding

    so much waiting, but no result
    answers pending, reply on halt

    was droppin by
    just to say hi
    “reply me please”,
    and you’re still freeze

    you were there, captured by the eye
    tragic’ly, ren zai xin buzai

    cozy night, “See!sky had full moon!”
    did not think of you at first place
    but you showin up as thypoon
    rushin my heart with lots of trace

    you’re pretending you were busy
    in fact, you were just too lazy
    to spend a little time with me
    without such thing called “wholeheartedly”

    you said that you had time to spare.
    while talk with me, you ain’t really there
    you discarded all dose of Care
    canteen’s soup, tastelessly bare

    translated version,
    tweaked a little
    (ummm dramatizing a bit, actually :p)
    in order to match the rhyme 😀
    *sedang ngalami hal sama nih van :p

    -dave-

  4. April 2, 2009 at 2:35 am

    haha, ada2 aja nih dave
    creative!
    thanx y
    Gbu


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